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they say in here-
forcing to see you children's death is like forcing to see your future's death
8 years agoReply
Bluemoon Scriptor
That's what I was running off πŸ‘Œ
8 years agoReply
i truly wish no one face such fate....
btw it is really well written...
8 years agoReply
Bluemoon Scriptor
@rosemill2017, maybe not in a battle scene, but you'd be suprised. 

Thanks! I like paragraph competitions because it hones your skills. Makes you choose your words with more precision.
8 years agoReply
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