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車有木
感謝參加，以下為我的一些感想，非專業評論，看看便可：

很具象的譬喻，將青春比作一種液體，並將學生或青年學習路程，寫成液體的各種作用與性質，和夏日的自然景象作結合，是很不錯的發想。


身為同在準備考試的人，我很能感受作者想傳達的情緒：那是一種妄想發光發熱、一鳴驚人，而去拚盡全力一次的衝動。希望所有學子都能成為那道驚雷，閃過一瞬而映入眾人眼中。
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