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楠都月
看到這裏（
覺得大大文筆還挺可以的，真的要說意見的話，就是一開始到入高校的過程有點長，不知道讀者會不會有興趣堅持到這個位置。

2 weeks agoReply
小哩
哇謝謝你！！！謝謝你願意耐心看完我的作品😚⋯⋯！！！
其實我也有在思考這個問題⋯⋯不過感覺再濃縮下去的話，會有很多東西沒有講到這樣！
還是挺煩惱的😫⋯⋯！！
不過劇情也離進入高校不遠了！！！
2 weeks agoReply
楠都月
@小哩,沒事，每個人有不同的故事開局方式。我覺得這樣也挺不錯的。
2 weeks agoReply
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