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子喜
謝謝你的建議，因為我當時主要是希望讓閱讀的人能夠走進銜月這個人的世界裡(當然故事不會一直是銜月他自己)，而您的建議採用插敘的方式確實也不失為另一種方法，由衷感激您的意見。(鞠躬)
1 month agoReply
鈴鈴卷
我覺得是把書名加長就能解決的問題，雖然這行為免不了俗氣，但很有用
前面塞太多設定，反而少了點順著文筆探究的新鮮感，但這就是作者的必要取捨了🥲
1 month agoReply
子喜
我功力不好，是你們不嫌棄🥲
1 month agoReply
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