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venomSketch

A council power that erases existence being casually mentioned while Isla falls asleep mid bedtime story is such a contrast of tones. well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
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1 month agoReply

elsaa_watson

I genuinely enjoyed reading your story. Your storytelling, pacing, and emotional weight are impressive, and it’s clear how much care you’ve put into it. While reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how well this story would work as a visual format like a comic or webtoon. I’m a professional commissioned artist specializing in adapting stories into expressive visuals, and I believe your work has great potential in that form. I’d love to connect and discuss a possible collaboration.

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6 months agoReply

Camila

Today, I read your story, and I truly enjoyed it. I really admire your writing style you have expressed everything in a perfect manner. Your story touched my heart, and the characters are also very well developed.

8 months agoReply

Josephine

My favorite character here is Lucien. When he begs Evra to ask the council about the forbidden power, do you think it’s driven more by desperation or by guilt?

9 months agoReply

Hi !!
That was a great piece! Intrigue grows with the council’s erasure power, while Evra’s family moments add warmth. Lucien’s shaken state deepens the tension. can I ask a few things about it?

10 months agoReply

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