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MoonDrift

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7 months agoReply

Lara

Hey your updates are so exciting to read! The writing feels very visual, almost like scenes from a show. I thought of something that might add even more value, want me to tell you?

7 months agoReply

MoonDrift

That’s really kind of you to say! I’m glad you’re enjoying the updates. I’d definitely like to hear your thoughts.

7 months agoReply

Lara

@MoonDrift, Great, so can we discuss it over Discord?

7 months agoReply

MoonDrift

@Lara, Sure could you share me your username?

7 months agoReply

Lara

@MoonDrift, It's lara_winters

7 months agoReply

MoonDrift

@Lara,okay

7 months agoReply

Josephine

Favorite character here is you, the author. when you started this short story, did you already know how it was going to end, or did the ending surprise you as you wrote it?

8 months agoReply

MoonDrift

Glad you like it! I used to think writing was easy, but when I started, I often lost my words and didn’t know how to continue or end the story. Some authors gave me motivation along the way, and one night, while reading a novel with a different twist, I was surprised and inspired. That’s when I decided to end my story using the developer as the trump card, an ending that even surprised me.

8 months agoReply

Josephine

@MoonDrift, Nice! Do you have Discord? We could discuss more there if you’d like.

8 months agoReply

MoonDrift

@Josephine, Sure! What’s your Discord username?

8 months agoReply

Josephine

@MoonDrift, @josephinehampton

8 months agoReply

MoonDrift

@Josephine, okay

8 months agoReply

Montserrat

You opted for an interesting ending where the characters completely break down. It turned out well, although I think it needed more time. However, as it is your first attempt, it was good and daring. I hope you continue and write another story. I look forward to your future writings. ^___^

8 months agoReply

MoonDrift

Glad you liked it! Thanks a lot for the feedback ✨ Next story I’ll take it slow and try to make it flow more smoothly 🌿

8 months agoReply

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