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楠都月
問答? 還以為一來就打打殺殺了...
7 months agoReply
殺出血路
這是智鬥故嘛，必須有點這樣的元素
7 months agoReply
天木幾木各
重量級算是有優勢 噸位不同 光拿著東西擋著衝撞就很有殺傷力 還是力量型🤔
9 months agoReply
原子能
開場就是地獄難度！隊友全是「重量級」，一個眼鏡妹感覺是毒舌擔當，一個肥貓看來是豬隊友預備役，幸好還有個好兄弟撐著。毒舌眼鏡女、魯莽力量型胖子、忠誠的好兄弟，這些角色組合在團隊冒險類網文中較為常見。缺乏一些獨創性的驚喜。後續劇情可以為他們增添更多層次。
9 months agoReply
殺出血路
(作者不擅長人物描繪，這點被各方大佬吐嘈過很多次了
稍後修一修吧
9 months agoReply
原子能
@殺出血路,其實沒那麼嚴重，就提醒一下而已
9 months agoReply
珞玥
突然就變成益智問答的環節了嗎！
俊偉…有點可憐呢…不管到哪都被排擠
9 months agoReply
殺出血路
這個只是開端呀🥺
9 months agoReply
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