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AnFr安鍅
（拖了超級無敵久的東西）評語：這篇真的有打到我！前半段日記超級少女心，滿滿的甜膩和期待，結果一轉就是心碎的反差，眼淚差點要掉下來。落桑梨的心情寫得特別真，尤其是那種「我等著你回來」到最後「我不等你了」的轉折，超級戳心。
陸彥的懊悔放在後面補敘，形成強烈對比，看得人心裡酸酸的。尤其是最後一句「若有來世，我定當取落桑梨為妻」很有古典式悲劇的收尾感，讀完久久無法抽離。
整體來說，這就是一篇青春戀愛裡最殘酷卻最真實的錯過，虐得剛剛好！
8 months agoReply
思靜
謝謝安鍅大大評語😘
8 months agoReply
魚
『拖了很久的傢伙來了.極度不專業評語』
在怨懟與無法溝通的那一刻，兩個人就已經走向了不同的方向，如果拖下去，痛苦的又會是誰呢？
所以說，愛情跟麵包，只能選一個呢？（跑題金魚
9 months agoReply
思靜
沒關係啦！ 我選麵包！
9 months agoReply
魚
@思靜麵包好吃✓
9 months agoReply
思靜
@魚,Yes！
9 months agoReply
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