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AnFr安鍅
評語：這篇真的滿震撼的，前面還以為只是受傷的小暗衛想博主子關心，結果居然直接被吸血（？）還死掉！情緒轉折很強，結尾那句「你就叫霜雪」讓人起雞皮疙瘩，感覺公子真的很瘋，卻也很孤單。畫面感超強，像在看黑暗古裝劇。
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
好可怕的雙向奔赴
11 months agoReply
茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

我好喜歡你的序詩，克制的吸血鬼公子好慾好香喔。
冷冷的、有點小衝動，篇幅短小但人物性格營造卻不馬虎呢。
1 year agoReply
月穎靈
感謝參加！一個一個湊上來給人當血包，好瘋好愛😍
1 year agoReply
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