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孤蒼寰 sponsored 500coins for Issue 118!
賀一章完結~辛苦了
深淵看上舊神，戰鬥的格局要變更大了，最後恭喜拿到神鳥型態TaJaDol(X)
1 week agoReply
星野維
感謝打賞！世界觀正逐漸擴大。
6 days agoReply
大秦書說人
嗯，在下猜翔太大概是當初與那巨鳥相戀的轉世吧……
2 months agoReply
星野維
這個是開放式結局，沒有絕對的答案😁
2 months agoReply
大秦書說人
@星野維,開放式，哼哼，大俠你說呢
2 months agoReply
CF LAM
真的好感動，戰力方面，我以為要崩壞了，因為和輝沒可能一下子能戰勝一個舊神啊。

但你控制得非常好，用另一種展開，避開了直接戰勝舊神。撇開劇情，在寫作的角度來看，這樣和輝之後還有很多上升的潛力可以寫。

作為寫作新手的我，真的佩服
3 months agoReply
星野維
因為就算是削弱的伊塔庫亞也是絕對強大的，如果打贏了以後就不知道怎麼寫下去了。
3 months agoReply
原子能
這一章的標題和結尾呼應得很好"再見！我們所創造的桃源鄉"
4 months agoReply
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