DID YOU JUST.... say the title in the story? Yep you did. Wow, this a very complex argument. I don't even know how you came up with this or how you were able to get to this part. That was just beautiful.
I did chuckle at some of the parts in this story because it's just funny how some of their conversations went. I like the ending part of this chapter as well. That moment when Puck panicked because he wasn't sure what is up with Nova about the stars part was pretty unsettling, for me, atleast 'cause I thought they were going to fight but that didn't happen (phew! haha). Just when you thought you know what they're talking about, the direction took a little spin (about seeing the colours) and she seemed a wee bit upset that he didn't really get her (or maybe she was afraid that he would judge her?) It really makes one think that there's more to Nova than what she revealed to her friends - she's one mysterious character, to me, which I love :D Good job at executing this one~
I love that you totally get this story and the complications of the characters... it gives me hope that I'm actually getting my message across! Just remember that I have the most awesome ending in the works for this story, and its not even close to over!!
@Andrew Knight, Oh man, you got me all stoked because NOW I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE ENDING~ Keep up the excellent job and I suppose we'll all just have to wait for the grandeur ending :D
Good job at executing this one~
Keep up the excellent job and I suppose we'll all just have to wait for the grandeur ending :D