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The village scene was horrid and ghastly, and that also added to her fear, anger, and worries for her own village and also made her miss the safety she had felt back then. I can't help but feel a little worried that they'll be exposed especially with Lorca in his dragon form ughh I'm so scared >.<

Also, I thought the whole banter about sleeping under his wings and his laughter was somewhat a nice touch. It was a lighter feeling compared to all the horrible things and situation that they went through. 
7 years agoReply
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