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蘇奇恩
我對原設故事沒有概念（除了漫威和漩渦）~
開頭的十幾篇不錯很有趣，但往後可能是太多東西了，以我個人的閱讀習慣有點消化不來，不過大致理解到故事發展，只是寫太急會有點浪費了你的作品，可以再多點鋪排（可能我理解有點慢，純粹個人習慣😅😅😅）
7 years agoReply
龍傲天
謝謝你😄，寫到中途我真的感覺有點過快
7 years agoReply
蘇奇恩
崩壞的笑點😂
7 years agoReply
龍傲天
呃..哈哈😄
7 years agoReply
龍傲天
你覺得我寫成如何？除了名字和錯別字外🙈🙈🙈
7 years agoReply
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