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孤蒼寰
大大作品在持續進化中，從一開始的冷硬風格到現在在衝突之間放日常，情緒曲線起落都有在安排，看得出有用了很多心機呢。
動作戲也很流暢，不是單純的招式對撞，我很喜歡
5 days agoReply
墨消然
謝謝你！看到你說「不是單純的招式對撞」我真的很開心，因為這正是我想寫的方向。我希望《武道少年》的武打不只是打得帥，而是每一拳、每一次失誤、每一次站起來，都能跟角色的情緒和成長有關。後面我會繼續把日常、衝突跟動作戲磨得更好，謝謝你願意一路看到現在！
4 days agoReply
黑靈
作品就是有種能量，能夠支撐著作者走下去。
只要你不放棄它們，它們就會陪著你一路走下去。

寫作加油🔥☀️
1 week agoReply
墨消然
嗯嗯 話說 我都來不及整理給你看 你下子就看這麼多去了
1 week agoReply
黑靈
@墨消然,不整理也沒關係🤣
1 week agoReply
小白
加油。好看，我看慢。
1 week agoReply
墨消然
沒關係 我也發表的慢 哈哈
1 week agoReply
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