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[*Singing*] Dylan little honey that made him cough out blood~

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

The only thing that could've made me appreciate that Captain America line more is if KJ was holding a trashcan lid as a shield before giving SF a good swing, since the Capt's usually getting kicked around before saying that, rather than throwing chairs...also, I feel like it makes more sense to swing chairs around instead of throwing.

Dylan was pretty good at throwing Eli around, but maybe they should have let her and Stage Fright wear each other out more while they saved their strength...not that I know WHY those two have a reason to try to kill each other.

Eh, I dunno how Eli broke free of her and threw her in the closet, but he should've kept her in there the rest of the night and go back to help Killer.

SF and DC are like complete opposites, one of them is a lot more relatable than the other...I'm sure SF's wife had a good reason for leaving him, I wouldn't be surprised if he was violent back then...and maybe next time, Killer can just lead with the gun, if that had fallen out of his shirt, he could've been in a LOT of trouble...besides, at the point he shot SF, it really wasn't necessary, he could've just ran over to him and smack him with the with base of the weapon, it'd been less bloody...I dunno what kinda damage that bullet inflicted, but it's not like he was heat with a water gun.

Also, lol, why was DC going for the vent? XD

7 years agoReply

Createology

It seems to me like you sound pretty disappointed about the way the showdown happened

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@Createology, Well, they did fall around and get up pretty often for how hard they get hit...and a lot of times whenever someone has a knife, it misses until the knife holder throws a punch or grabs the person. I also feel like when Eli asked where his mic was, either he or DC should've let the other person go after it, pretending to be about to dash over to it, and then crash the table against them. Also kinda wonder what material the masks are made of, cuz both DC and SF had them, but they were less like protection--lots of bloody noses--and more like how it's said in the story, to look cool.

7 years agoReply

Createology

@Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but reading all of your comments from the first two stories and then this one, I'm getting the impression that this is probably your least favorite of the three.

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@Createology, I think that's probably correct, but I do like the idea of Myer's old friend and rival being motivated to trying to shut him down, as well as two enemies, and it makes sense they never saw each other, since one based in the greenroom and the other had a lair under stage...just don't get why they didn't work against a common enemy.

7 years agoReply

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