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Omega-3(秋雁)
@凌步
5 months agoReply
凌步
太感謝你了！仔細的閱讀和用心的心得，還有極致的效率，真的太感謝了٩(ˊᗜˋ)و

很高興你有覺得前面的舖墊有效地堆疊到結尾的快感。能令你有這樣的感想，我覺得在這一點上我可以稍為覺得是成功了嘿

恩恩，本來我也擔心如果你只看前十章，會不會覺得不知所云……所以你居然全看完了，我真的很高興喔！也謝謝你喜歡細膩的描寫！

節奏方面我會再看看怎麼修稿，謝謝你的意見～

「遺憾」是這個故事最重要的主題，謝謝你有看到最後，還把心得都看了！恩，創作之路真的不容易，我們一起加油吧！

再一次謝謝你的心得，祝新年快樂！٩(ˊᗜˋ)و
5 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
@凌步,新年快樂！我看過很多重心在心裡描寫的書，所以其實還好
5 months agoReply
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