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曉昱
謝謝 @Rider的編輯建議
目前已更新
7 months agoReply
Rider
來了😎
嗯，感覺看了但又沒看甚麼www
7 months agoReply
曉昱
一個過渡章節，就只是想說轉班的事
我自己也覺得寫得不好，但又不知道怎麼改😅
7 months agoReply
Rider
@曉昱, 我剛剛提出了編輯建議，希望對妳有幫助😁
雖然我的文筆也不是很好就是了www
7 months agoReply
曉昱
@Rider,看到了，已更新。
非常感謝
7 months agoReply
Rider
@曉昱,很高興能幫到妳😙
7 months agoReply
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