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各個班級的測試同步進行，這種多線敘事處理得很好，不過也缺少點新意。刃音早希、蛇嶺優幸這些角色也開始有戲份了。彗辰星夢居然是綜合第一？這有伏筆？
9 months agoReply
洛々ka
提供一點意見，一個章節的內容字數有點太長，大概一千到兩千字一個章節就夠了。
而且請讓我好奇問一問...
這些充滿創意力的姓氏的靈感是從哪裏來的？我創作出來的姓氏都只是參考戰國武將（例如上杉、前田、天草），而這部作品的角色名字都帶出非常科幻的感覺。

10 months agoReply
深淵
1.我人物的名稱大部分是跟能力、個性相關，只有少部分角色是因為一些背景故事取名

2.字數的部分我是上網查詢別人大概一個章節寫多少我參考的(你的建議我也會傾聽，但我後面改成2000多字一章節，會不會跟前面相比顯得突兀）
10 months agoReply
洛々ka
@深淵, 不會，因為我也是這樣
10 months agoReply
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