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AnFr安鍅
（拖了超級無敵久的東西）評語：哈哈哈！是後續～我好愛～～

好喜歡～請在多寫一點～～

這篇的氛圍超到位！開頭一句「等著妳自願走向我」直接定調，虐心又浪漫。凜天的矛盾和潔癖，跟楓葉的勇敢直白形成強烈對比，兩個人一退一進，張力拉得很滿。最後親吻的場景也很有畫面感，夕陽、懸崖、風聲，代入感十足。
簡單說，就是：浪漫虐心，畫面感一流，但更像絕美插曲而非完整章節。
8 months agoReply
笨笨小獅
感謝喜歡
8 months agoReply
魚
『拖了很久的傢伙來了.極度不專業評語』

媽耶？苦澀的初期和最后回甘的愛情✓

暗戀總是苦澀，戳破窗戶紙的愉悅，不論一瞬還是一輩子，都令人回味無窮✓
9 months agoReply
笨笨小獅
😍
8 months agoReply
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