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看完以上，覺得作者你很可愛www
還滿多可以進步的空間啦，多看看其他小說的運筆寫法，會讓自己的作品更好看哦。
9 years agoReply
楓曉湘
謝謝你的建議喔~😃
9 years agoReply
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