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笨笨小獅
我以為這篇會被人罵ww，只是為了鋪陳最後的悲劇，但我真的也希望，如果只停留在這裡，會是一個喜極而泣的好結局ww。

感謝ww
1 year agoReply
AnFr安鍅
評語：怎麼說呢？前面戰火的淒涼很好的鋪敘了這個故事，有人罵主角冷血的部分也是一個很好的轉折點。

最後，回到家抱著妻子痛哭的畫面感也很強。就是說，在戰火之下誰，不想回家啊？

整體而言，給我的衝擊力非常大！
1 year agoReply
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