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阿掌
倒數第二段，應是「倒」是便宜她了。

很喜歡「像磁鐵一般吸了回去」的描述，很適切！我看了蠻多部的作者都是國高中生，但大家的接吻寫的真是讓我嘆為觀止，肯定是我書讀得太少才如此無知的對吧（？
2 years agoReply
妍羽
❤️❤️❤️

或許是因為沒經歷過更能天馬行空的想像吧～
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@妍羽,但描寫的這麼貼切……屬實是難啊！
2 years agoReply
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