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罪夜
我看鄰居先生也是忍很久了，根本對這偶像的資訊一清二楚XDD
不過說實在的，這樣看來撫子平時回家沒有經太多變裝，還敢在隔音很差的房子裡叫得這麼大聲，都不怕被揭發嗎😂
3 years agoReply
Tecchan
一般人不會特別去注意同屬在公寓裡的住戶是什麼身份，加上是相對高級的公寓，住戶都更加注重隱私，在住宅組合提醒後兩人也會愈來愈收斂的。
3 years agoReply
贺之拙
怎麼說，文章以女主的視角敘述實在讓人有點尬，有種意識層面上攻守易位的感覺，通俗點代入感差，另外劇情銜接不敢恭維，為何刻畫這種白日夢級的一見鍾情及痴男怨女，歸根結底，作者筆力還太稚嫩了，推一篇大師級的情色文學，作者不妨一觀，南天雁《北方的天空》，望有所增益。
3 years agoReply
Tecchan
謝謝指教，這邊會再努力精進。
3 years agoReply
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3 years agoReply
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