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寂魚
評分A
評語

從春分到芒種
春初的微雨
能讓能感受出萬物灌溉
一份溫暖又和煦

而又同時再次呼應了
立春之時那雄心壯志
想必也能在有朝一日
衝破九霄
扶雲直上

如同那一道春雷驚蟄
10 months agoReply
寂魚
-----2025.8.4-----
10 months agoReply
存在
評分：A
10 months agoReply
陳少明
感謝評分
10 months agoReply
存在
大家一起評分吧
10 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
評分：Ａ

評語：

該作品非常用心，不僅將節氣融入作品中，

更能看見筆者的用心，想必是下了非常多的苦功。
10 months agoReply
陳少明
感謝評分，新詩不是我擅長的範疇，唯有多下苦功
10 months agoReply
菜根
評分：A
10 months agoReply
陳少明
感謝評分
10 months agoReply
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