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欠我一粒甘栗
我也跟隨鴨子的步伐找到一篇好文！
5 years agoReply
燄荻
謝謝你的喜歡:D
5 years agoReply
mynameisMY
跟隨百葉的步伐找到一篇好文～期待～～～～
5 years agoReply
燄荻
謝謝你的期待:D希望後續不會讓你失望
5 years agoReply
穹葉
描述不錯，有種平靜之下暗潮洶湧的味道，會讓人期待後續欸:D（默默路過）
ps：部分錯字多加留心
5 years agoReply
燄荻
謝謝你的欣賞:D

不過想請問一下錯字是在哪裡呢？我檢查了一遍但是沒有發現Q_Q
5 years agoReply
穹葉
@驛馬,加油！是一些滿細小的錯字，同音錯字，我不太方便說，抱歉(つд⊂)
5 years agoReply
燄荻
@葉墨生花❈穹葉,好的，還是謝謝你:D
5 years agoReply
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