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終於可以打賞，謝謝雀的心得😘🫶

9 months agoReply

謝謝錢錢！

9 months agoReply

雀看那麼快！昨天還在聊，然後就看完了🤣
謝謝感想！原來我寫都市愛情好像也不錯？🤣

是的！最初場景上是一點點混亂，但最後都有寫清楚地點在哪的🤣那裡有個小劇情。

再次謝謝雀😘🫶

9 months agoReply

別客氣xdd場景我是看到後面才能確認

9 months agoReply

@阿雀, 😘😘❤️然後我不懂用app打賞😅😂

9 months agoReply

@西諾尼亞,好像要用網頁

9 months agoReply

@阿雀,🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲

9 months agoReply

高手，短短三段即入戲

9 months agoReply

很厲害對吧xdd

9 months agoReply

@阿雀, 學習中😂😂😂

9 months agoReply

要是有入戲就好了🥹🥹🫶

9 months agoReply

@西諾尼亞, 除了看你寫的😂，還應該看甚麼書好？

9 months agoReply

@一凱, 我不知道耶哈哈
這個短篇是我第二個完成的作品😂回頭看應該會有很多不足

9 months agoReply

@西諾尼亞, 真正有才華！

9 months agoReply

@一凱, 真正的隨意寫！🤣

9 months agoReply

@西諾尼亞

9 months agoReply

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