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夜臨 Yalin Hayami
搓了搓臉頰>>戳了戳臉頰
2 years agoReply
罪夜
這裡倒不是錯字，只是感覺臉頰改成下巴比較好理解。
我當時腦中的畫面應該是下巴放在虎口，然後食指搓臉頰思索。
2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
@罪夜,摩挲下巴。
2 years agoReply
罪夜
@夜臨, 是可以，但我當時想的動作跟這個有點差距，所以就寫成搓臉頰了。
2 years agoReply
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