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明一凡
看來是零子自爆肝臟血肉之作…補充下，「心虛了一下」外在表情應該是「目光閃爍，不敢直視我」。
心虛屬於主角的主觀判斷。解構小說的模組也能提高用詞精準度
2 years agoReply
言荒
謝謝建議
2 years agoReply
言荒
什麼是自爆肝臟血肉
2 years agoReply
明一凡
@言荒,熬夜寫的意思，行文到越末尾，好像強打精神撐著寫的
2 years agoReply
腥霜
@明一凡,我以為你說女魔族自爆
2 years agoReply
明一凡
@腥霜,留言時把主題當哏，增添一點趣味嘛
2 years agoReply
腥霜
都復活了，下篇就100篇達成
2 years agoReply
言荒
欸 我都沒發現我100了
2 years agoReply
腥霜
@言荒,不如下篇變感言
2 years agoReply
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