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五香肉丁 sponsored 25coins for Issue 10!
6 years agoReply
五香肉丁
靠北啊XD前面鋪墊這麼長原本是這個原因啊，還以為恐怖故事呢。

但是作為笑話而言，字數有點過多，而且超越了原本定的字數限制，或許可以刪減一些不必要的形容詞，增加描述老闆平時行為，來產生更多的笑點。
6 years agoReply
糸口月
啊我忘記有字數限制了抱歉
回頭再修修
6 years agoReply
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