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艾瑞卡(Erica)
不錯不錯！(≧▽≦)

但有些地方卡卡的，比如：
「也不知道前面有著何物」可改成「也不知前方有何物」

用這樣表示，氣氛會比較合適！

寫作愉快！(≧▽≦)
7 years agoReply
寫寫(寫些)
想要挽回的那種心情在夢裡成型了嗎⋯⋯
7 years agoReply
簡潔
嗯。。。解夢說，現實生活中錯過了什麼吧......? 
7 years agoReply
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