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發現香港人～(・∀・)
8 years agoReply
雖然自己也是(*´∀｀)
8 years agoReply
青山鳥
@忻悠,遇到同鄉了lol，一起加油吧
8 years agoReply
@青山鳥,加油(^o^)丿
8 years agoReply
瀧介
你趕出來了耶，恭喜你呀😄

故事開端就切入了重點，敘述中，沒有其他怠慢拖敘，流暢度很夠。

雖然說，你說有些東西沒寫進去，但這樣我覺得已經足夠，如果覺得寫不夠，可以在殭屍末日３繼續創作挑戰。

感謝你的參與😄
8 years agoReply
青山鳥
這是因為已經是第二回了，所以也跳過了起源的部分
8 years agoReply
瀧介
@青山鳥,這方面是沒關係，因為故事的重點，有時候還是傾向於後面，哈哈
8 years agoReply
瀧介
@瀧介,不過想來想去，起源也很重要
8 years agoReply
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