You're so right! I need to know when you publish the next issue- I can't wait! You should definitely publish this when it's finished. Also, do you know what is going to happen at the end?
Thank you SOO much! I do have a good idea because its all tied into this faux WW2 world I've been working on, but I NEED to find my notes on this thing! Get myself organized! haha
how much have you planned? This story needs an intricate plot and so you should start deciding what the ending will be (not to intrude as its going really well so far)
It's all tied in with the world my stories 'tick of the idle hour' and 'wolf in waiting' are in, I have the ultimate end in mind, especially for the city of Tyr. I'm still working out the final specific details for this one. Your enthusiasm makes me feel so good!! I need to spit out the next chapter of this one!
This is fantastic!! From your cleverly selected images to set the mood of the chapter, to your carefully constructed characters, setting and plot. I particularly like how your characters interact with eachother.You have veered away from Anson being the "bully" as such to a much more complex creature. I look forward to how each character develops, along with your intriguing ideas and plotline.
Oh my goodness! What a reassuring review! I love this story but have felt somewhat insecure about my pacing of the plot. You just made me feel SO much better! Thank you so much!!!
@Frances, You shouldn't be insecure! It's great story - perfect for this cultural climate. I kept walking to my bookcase thinking it was a book until I realized it was yours!
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From your cleverly selected images to set the mood of the chapter, to your carefully constructed characters, setting and plot.
I particularly like how your characters interact with eachother.You have veered away from Anson being the "bully" as such to a much more complex creature.
I look forward to how each character develops, along with your intriguing ideas and plotline.
Continue!