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老薑糖
謝謝小魚，你的評價給了我很大的信心！我會繼續努力的⁽⁽ ◟(∗ ˊωˋ ∗)◞ ⁾⁾

至於張文豪的對白裡，在選擇要讓出座位時，他講了一句：我要謙讓，與他人同榮。
這不是正常人的說話風格，所以才被判定「不像人」了，若這句不太明顯，我可以再強化一點怪異感！
2 months agoReply
小魚一尾
謝謝參加～張文豪這樣的怪異感我覺得還可以因為後面尹凡有解釋XD但一開始只覺得他怪怪很冷靜的沒想到不是人了
謙讓這句是沒注意到什麼異常
2 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@老薑糖
2 months agoReply
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