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洛伊團隊的調查進展過於緩慢，顯得有些無能。連續幾章，他們抓到的線索都斷了，或者抓到的人拒不開口，所有突破都依賴蒼煌的「提示」。這會讓讀者對主角團隊的能力產生懷疑，長此以往不利於主角形象的樹立。
9 months agoReply
蒼煌
這點我同意~不過因為這部小說原先是在別的論壇上連載已久，但那論壇的SERVER商突然跑路了。

我才放到PNN這邊連載，所以有些較早的章節都已經定案了，就沒做出修改。
9 months agoReply
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