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璐沐
不好意思我來晚了！
評語：
我有時候真的會突然跟朋友製造出一種曖昧的氣氛出來www好貼近生活XD
若是我也同主角一般遇到朋友突然完全人間蒸發的時候也是會崩潰啊！
7 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
評語：這篇超甜又超揪心！一開始蕙兒跟凡娜在咖啡廳吃冰淇淋聊天，超有那種夏天的chill感，結果聊著聊著就感覺有點曖昧，害我一直偷笑！蕙兒那句「還是你跟我交往」真的好可愛，感覺超像我跟閨蜜開玩笑的畫面！
後面凡娜突然失聯，真的嚇到我，還以為她故意甩了蕙兒，結果是因為那個恐怖情人前男友，真的氣死！那段凡娜哭著道歉，蕙兒還溫柔安慰她，真的好感動，我都想掉淚了！最後凡娜突然親上去，哇塞，甜到炸，但又有點太快，感覺可以再多點兩人怎麼變成情侶的過程，這樣會更讓人尖叫！
那個恐怖情人的設定好真實，害我都覺得有點毛毛的，還有凡娜哭著說「我找你好久好久」，真的超催淚！結尾親吻雖然有點突然，但還是好甜，害我想去咖啡廳找個女友了（笑）！
8 months agoReply
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