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AnFr安鍅
（拖了超級無敵久的東西）評語：文字帶有強烈的黑暗氣質與溫柔餘韻，像一首悲傷的散文詩，整體讀感成熟且有畫面感，讀者能被情緒牽引進入角色的世界。
亮點：「實驗性死亡」與「等待」的概念獨特。結尾的回音式寫法讓讀者意猶未盡。
角色外貌與神態描寫稍多一點，可強化「天才與瘋子之間」的反差。
8 months agoReply
魚
『拖了很久的傢伙來了.極度不專業評語』
有種心臟鈍痛的感覺……

學習的時候，總會出現，誰誰誰真厲害像天才之類的言論，天才的極致，和瘋子的區別，往往只在一瞬。

或許停留能獲得他的存在，可又是否是一場錯誤的自我感動？

適合深思的感覺……畢竟總有追不上的人，和救不了的人呀——
9 months agoReply
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