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茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

短短的對話卻不會感覺故事不完整，尤其軍官與副官的那兩句對比太讚了（大拇指
開放式的結尾帶點神祕感，我就猜軍官真的不是愛上她 :3
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
評語：在很短的篇幅內，雖然沒有交代很多角色背後的關係，但透過角色之間的對話可以很清楚地了解暗藏在背後的故事。沒有用過多的文字與篇幅去寫主角與逃犯過往，但透過簡單的文字讓讀者不自覺地想去探索、想像到底發生了什麼。
11 months agoReply
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