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AnFr安鍅
評語：這篇真的太適合做成短動畫或小說連載了，有沒有考慮出番外或前傳？我已經開始腦補少女的真名了（笑）！繼續寫，我會等你下一篇！

天啊這篇真的把我整個人心臟揉碎欸……一開始那個冬日、大雪、微小星火的氛圍就很有那種末世奇幻感，結果後面根本是眼淚製造機！

角色情感真的太飽滿，少女一路從強撐到崩潰、從堅定到落淚，空從失憶到回憶湧現，最後再落入命運的悲劇輪迴裡，那個落下深淵的場面簡直神來一筆。
11 months agoReply
寧織
謝謝^ 暑假打算再更新的主文，這對不是主的但會寫成番外上去。大綱已經寫好啦，應該說這篇其實是之後的伏筆...?之後會好好寫的^
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@寧織,加油！期待喔～
11 months agoReply
茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

故事堆得好美好喜歡，氣氛營造也很有日輕的感覺，曉風殘月的場景瞬間就構好在眼前了///
還有孩子，我覺得妳這個年紀寫這樣超級厲害的（合掌
1 year agoReply
寧織
謝謝!(‾◡◝)
1 year agoReply
月穎靈
感謝參加！喔耶萬歲，是我最愛的BE劇情，撕心裂肺好帶感😍😍😍
1 year agoReply
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