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W.H.
我喜歡這個故事，只是，有點期待逆轉，像是鄭男感化白河，令白河也拋棄甜點，變得養生起來。

或是鄭男發現那些甜點都是地溝油、混蛋、反式脂肪製成的，察其來源，竟然是他那兩個不成材的兒子上班的工廠做的。

為了挽救白河和自己，鄭男是否應該大義滅親？

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我很喜歡「鄭男」這個角色，覺得滿立體的，人設也很好，所以希望作者給他一個好結局。

你改寫的〈糖果屋〉，我覺得很不錯👍！！
2 years agoReply
　
沒......因為再寫下去會變BL(被打
畫風會改變XD

感謝喜歡! 
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@柳夢,不客氣^^

原來「這樣那樣」是這個意思～
2 years agoReply
　
@W.H.,對......XDD
2 years agoReply
阿掌
人生真難啊
2 years agoReply
　
@阿掌,很難哪~~~
2 years agoReply
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