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涼樹
我覺得第三點不錯，停在一個我很確定我要寫啥的地方，這有點像是記憶連鎖?這半句keyword會促使我思考我寫這句的前提是啥，不過對話我就比較少這樣做，我盡可能希望人物對話有梗，寫一半會忽然失憶原本要放什麼笑點進去
2 years agoReply
倒提壺
我常常會一斷就斷在講話，或是敘述句的一半。
也許哪天停在比較完整的中斷點，就會狀況改善一點？
2 years agoReply
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