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阿掌
瑟琳娜準備調教帕里斯時的敘述：她「給」相信自己有能力處理眼前這個單純的男人。不太確定，應是贅字？
艾碧被謠言纏繞時，其中一句：出「生」不乾淨，做事也不乾淨。
結合前後文應為出「身」？
3 years agoReply
湘坵
喔對也🤣，已改正，謝謝阿掌喔耶耶耶
3 years agoReply
阿掌
@湘坵,不客氣^^
3 years agoReply
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