/comment.php?chapter=10&id=101466
Comments - 那兒降下一道光 The Sunbeams | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 那兒降下一道光 The Sunbeams
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
無明孤舟
懶惰的日威484人帥真好的代名詞XDD（欸

二郎擊殺豬豬和收刀的動作也太帥了吧，不愧是武士村出來的孩子😍😍😍
3 years agoReply
青小豆
又帥又強，是人生勝利組的代名詞🥺🥺
二郎：我每天砍那麼多竹子果然沒有白費！
3 years agoReply
阿雀
好帥！
3 years agoReply
青小豆
沒有啦 過獎了（羞）
謝謝雀😍
3 years agoReply
罪夜
寫到甩刀時腦內就先自動跑出畫面了，再看了看文字敘述，還蠻一致的，是很有畫面感的描寫😆

這暴躁豬豬其實只看舉動還蠻可愛的（？），結果瞬間就被截肢，好慘😂
3 years agoReply
青小豆
看來我們想像出同一個畫面😎 
其實我希望描述能再精簡一點，功力繼續慢慢磨XD 但被稱讚還是好開心，謝謝罪夜🙈

豬豬在這故事一直都是待遇很淒慘的怪物，好像有點可憐😂😂
3 years agoReply
現代龍
日本武士收納刀的方式真的很帥，描寫方式我都寫不出來，小豆好厲害👍  我家裡有武士刀，小豆需要可以借給你練練😂
3 years agoReply
青小豆
武士刀！！！阿龍家裡竟然會有，太酷了吧🤩！是開鋒過的刀嗎？

我在寫之前是研究這支影片，被巴士道帥一波，直接追蹤🙈
https://youtu.be/Uem0HlJWEtg
3 years agoReply
現代龍
@青小豆,當然是沒開鋒啊，不然會因違反刀械槍砲法被抓😅  我去日本買回來的😙
3 years agoReply
鈴鈴卷 sponsored 100coins for Issue 10!
寶寶裝，笑死我，還不充值去商城買一套點裝來穿！
3 years agoReply
青小豆
寶寶裝真的跟點裝一樣中看不中用XDD 不過點裝都很漂亮！謝謝鈴鈴捲😆
3 years agoReply
Show more...
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.