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偉爾
阿…我們同為奇幻類小說這給作者你看看http://www.penana.com/story/11691/魔法世界/issue/0
9 years agoReply
偉爾
一打開門之後，門後就是那精緻的小屋。然後一位少女帶著熟悉的臉孔，從房間裏走出來。他抱著最後的希望與期待，繼續扭動門柄，大力推動這道門。然而事實是——門被鎖上了。就算他再怎麼的用力，也只是徒勞無功。這毛盾了欸～
9 years agoReply
Lapizure
謝謝你的意見～
其實我想寫的是理司希望可以把門打開，然後見到梅洛絲，只可惜事與願違。
以後我會多加改善的，感謝你細心的閱讀！

9 years agoReply
偉爾
@秋月,喔～
9 years agoReply
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