I like this overall, however, I read some of Prologue 2 and I am not seeing the connection between the two prologues. Maybe I need to read the whole thing to see the connection, but I think we need to edit this a bit so they flow better together
Glad to hear you’re enjoying it! This is all subject to change and also where we fix plot holes and stuff (though, there have been none yet). I need to really do another chaoter of this.
I like the imagery of the storm being an attacker
Some sci-fi books like this I read jump in too fast and I can't keep track of the characters and places. This isn't like that! It starts just right.