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I like this overall, however, I read some of Prologue 2 and I am not seeing the connection between the two prologues. Maybe I need to read the whole thing to see the connection, but I think we need to edit this a bit so they flow better together

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I think that may be your problem on why you think the first prologue doesn't make much sense

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E.G.

@Piper Stanley, I forgot to mention- the Prologues set up different parts of the series.

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@E.G., Ohhhh, okay

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E.G.

@Piper Stanley, yeah. I am working on finding a way of connecting it all.

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bunnybear

I love the layout of this
I like the imagery of the storm being an attacker

Some sci-fi books like this I read jump in too fast and I can't keep track of the characters and places. This isn't like that! It starts just right.

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E.G.

The Prologues set up other books, but PI sets up the main storyline of this book.

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bunnybear

@E.G., cool.

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Sabrina

This is pretty great!

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E.G.

Glad to hear you’re enjoying it! This is all subject to change and also where we fix plot holes and stuff (though, there have been none yet). I need to really do another chaoter of this.

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