Wow, when I think about my writing when I was 12 years old, I have to say I'm impressed. This wasn't bad. Sad, but pretty well done. My writing was a sloppy mess at that age. If you keep it up, I think you could become a very great writer. Keep practicing. I think you have a lot of potential. :)
然後按「加至主畫面」
Gonna take a while though...
Though, you're going to have to wait a bit because I'm currently writing a new story and will have to finish it before I start this one.
I will try to be fast though!
Anyway...
Bye!, and stay tuned for part two!