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Suspenseful, I like it!
Only thing I would say is that an epilogue comes at the end of a story, so this should technically be a prologue.
Other than that, this seems like a cool story. :)

3 年前回覆

Littlexdancer

Thank you! That was what I meant, I can't believe I did that. I hope you continue to enjoy it :)

3 年前回覆

@My_eclipsed_sun , welcome! Also, it's ok, we all make mistakes :)

3 年前回覆

a.t.e

The way you create the build-up of intensity really grabs me! This seems like it’ll be a really cool story 👌

3 年前回覆

Littlexdancer

Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it :)

3 年前回覆

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