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Miss Anderson
Very interesting, especially about her heritage. I wonder if she is going to struggle with identity because of her father's words, whatever her heritage is. Being of mixed heritage myself, i know the identity  struggle and love stories that touch on this struggle, as it is a reality for many mixed race kids as they try to figure out their identity in a world that tries to tell them who they are. Anyway, that's another discussion lol. Besides some grammatical discrepancies, great so far, can't wait to see where it goes!
8 years agoReply
Lavinia Scott
Wow. It short but interesting though. 
 Just with the few elements I've got here, I'm already picturing the father's personality and physique. I'm quite appalled by the "father's" words, it was so harsh and filled with hatred.

9 years agoReply
Soulfulwriter
I tried to have a set word count, but I can never follow it. So some chapters will be shorter or longer than the others.
9 years agoReply
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