I really enjoyed reading this It was easy to read, but I could still imagine the fight scene like an anime and that's really cool. Good job
And lastly, I liked Estora from the start, unlike Xin 😂

Your story has become one of my favorites. I love how you developed the characters over time. Are you already working on another story, or do you have any ideas for future projects?

 Loved your story! The world and characters are easy to imagine, which is why I think it would translate beautifully into a manga or webtoon. It could be a great way to attract more readers. 
I'm a commission-based artist with experience creating manga/webtoon artwork and related projects. I’ve worked on similar pieces before, and I’d be happy to share my portfolio if you're interested. reach out at:akiracomicart2@[email protected] if interested.

Hello ,Your story was such a captivating experience for me. It read with so much emotion and clarity that it unfolded like a cinematic journey. rich, detailed, and full of life.As an artist who specializes in comics, manga, and animated-style visuals, I’m constantly looking for stories that deserve to live beyond the page. Yours has exactly that spark.I’d love to discuss turning your narrative into a visual format. be it a graphic novel, manga, or something animation-inspired. I think my illustration style paired with your writing could bring something truly unique to the world.Please feel free to review my portfolio to understand the range of my artwork. If this resonates, I’d be excited to talk about how we can make it happen.Instagram: flossie_the_artistDiscord: floessie_the_artistEmail: [email protected]

Completely drawn to the story !