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Frances
I am loving this! I agree with Coen, you have SUCH potential with us! Certainly got me hooked! The only thing I see for changes is that sometimes your sentences get a little wordy, try cutting out some extra words in your images to make them sharper. Other than that, this is fabulous!
Coen Wonder
The premise is great and I think the story can definitely be expanded to more depth!
Words Actually
Thanks Coen!
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