@Jeniffer, Oh yeah, I did. Just a few spelling mistakes here and there haha. I actually don't know. I needed to add some type of clue to make him seem a little suspicious and hot tempered so I just added this guy called Jase. XD
@MissFransisco, Ah I see. Well, your writing is very good. I'm just sitting here waiting for other entries. You can make 3 entries so please enter as many as you can~
@Jeniffer, Thank you, your writing is good too. *double thumbs up* I might do a short story linked to this one...maybe a news article about her missing. I don't know, the writer's block is real haha.
But did they fall off the cliff or something?
I mean... How can they fall?
Thank you haha! Though I had to edit it again because there were a few mistakes.
I get it now! It's amazing~
I'll be waiting for the edits, then~
Edits? I already edited it though.
I actually don't know. I needed to add some type of clue to make him seem a little suspicious and hot tempered so I just added this guy called Jase. XD
Well, your writing is very good.
I'm just sitting here waiting for other entries.
You can make 3 entries so please enter as many as you can~
I might do a short story linked to this one...maybe a news article about her missing. I don't know, the writer's block is real haha.
helped me so, prompt apps would work.