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Jeniffer
I like it!  *claps hands*
But did they fall off the cliff or something?
I mean... How can they fall?
10 years agoReply
Foreveraining
He pushed her. And he pushed his sister off and every other person. 
Thank you haha! Though I had to edit it again because there were a few mistakes. 
10 years agoReply
Jeniffer
@MissFransisco, Oh! So that's why they said "Looks can be deceiving"...
I get it now! It's amazing~
10 years agoReply
Foreveraining
@Jeniffer, Thank you again. I tried to put as many clues as possible. I liked this contest. Very creative. 
10 years agoReply
Jeniffer
@MissFransisco, Yeah. I tried to make it easy so everyone can understand :3
I'll be waiting for the edits, then~
10 years agoReply
Foreveraining
@Jeniffer,Well it was pretty good. :D 
Edits? I already edited it though.
10 years agoReply
Jeniffer
@MissFransisco, You said you need to edit it again... Oh well. The story is good. Who is Jase though?
10 years agoReply
Foreveraining
@Jeniffer, Oh yeah, I did. Just a few spelling mistakes here and there haha. 
I actually don't know. I needed to add some type of clue to make him seem a little suspicious and hot tempered so I just added this guy called Jase. XD
10 years agoReply
Jeniffer
@MissFransisco, Ah I see.
Well, your writing is very good.
I'm just sitting here waiting for other entries.
You can make 3 entries so please enter as many as you can~
10 years agoReply
Foreveraining
@Jeniffer, Thank you, your writing is good too. *double thumbs up*
I might do a short story linked to this one...maybe a news article about her missing. I don't know, the writer's block is real haha.
10 years agoReply
Jeniffer
@MissFransisco, You should try downloading some random writing prompts apps. There are some that were very good.
10 years agoReply
Foreveraining
@Jeniffer, I think I'll do that. I mean this actually 
helped me so, prompt apps would work.
10 years agoReply
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